I think you did a great job presenting your idea. A few things I thought you did well is speaking clearly and efficiently. You didn't talk too fast but it also had good flow. You had some really good transitions that made it easy to follow along and pay attention. I also liked how you opened up with a visualization, this grabbed my attention and served as a useful hook. In terms of critique, I would suggest that you address that there are other services that are trying to do the same thing and how you stand above the competition, also I would talk about who you are selling to and add a few numbers that give the listener an idea of how you are generating revenue... overall, great pitch!
I enjoyed your elevator pitch, you did a fantastic job presentation the idea and connecting with the consumers. I think your idea is very smart and there is a lot of room for growth and development here. I love Apple's approach to safer roads, if you haven't already checked out their car mode on IOS 11 you definitely should! They might be a great resource to look over to help set your idea in motion, especially if the device comes stock in a car.
James,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job presenting your idea. A few things I thought you did well is speaking clearly and efficiently. You didn't talk too fast but it also had good flow. You had some really good transitions that made it easy to follow along and pay attention. I also liked how you opened up with a visualization, this grabbed my attention and served as a useful hook. In terms of critique, I would suggest that you address that there are other services that are trying to do the same thing and how you stand above the competition, also I would talk about who you are selling to and add a few numbers that give the listener an idea of how you are generating revenue... overall, great pitch!
Brandon
Hello James,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch, you did a fantastic job presentation the idea and connecting with the consumers. I think your idea is very smart and there is a lot of room for growth and development here. I love Apple's approach to safer roads, if you haven't already checked out their car mode on IOS 11 you definitely should! They might be a great resource to look over to help set your idea in motion, especially if the device comes stock in a car.
-Thanks for sharing